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Special Thanks to @Maplecroft for editing this document, they helped me a ton in making this piece the best I can produce.
My first post on this site, and hopefully not my last. I think this is a nice introduction for my writings. Special thanks to @Maplecroft for assisting in the editing process.
Link: Here
Special thanks for: Gr-eth,
Jameson_Rain,
Justly_Svarog and
THE Ordinary for giving me critique on both this and the companion tale!
Pain.
Hopefully not the last
The first DA in years.
I like the image.
I like this.
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in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Object Classifications
I think, for those new to the site, like me, that this page explains very clearly what you should think about when writing an anomaly. It's clear, doesn't add too much fluff, and it's distinction between classes is well defined. Very nice, and thanks!
With regards,
draco99
My entire life has boiled down to this moment. This keyboard. What I write to you now is my blood, shed for your amusement.
Hey, i really like this proposal. Not only does make more sense to have specialised sites than those that can do everything, but it also opens up posibilities to make each site more unique, which is a plus in my book. Overall, i fully support this concept.
''Warehouse'' Site - Could also be written as WS-##, this is for FASA Sites designed & purpose-built to house Anomalous Artifacts/Items within the possession of FASA.
''Garden'' Site - Could also be written as GS-##, this is for FASA Sites built to contain either Anomalous Flora, and Anomalies which function similarly to land-based non-animalia lifeforms.
''Citadel'' Site - Could also be written as CS-##, for FASA sites designed to act to house, and also act as a base-of-operations in some situations, for humanoid Anomalies that are both cooperative and useful to the FASA.
''Lockup'' Site - Could also be written as LS-##, for FASA sites which are made to contain humanoid Anomalies which are hostile to the Agency and are a threat.
These are just a few specific ideas I had, and I would like to hear your opinions on the concept.
Alright, so i'ma repost this (slightly less) rough draft here, cause i'm a big dumb dumb. While this is WIP i still wanna know what you guys think.
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in discussion Writing / Archived Drafts » Critique Thread for my Final Draft - Onesteveyboy
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Thank you VANTA ,
Psychotobe and
JameBonTreeson for looking over and critiquing my Rough Draft.
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in discussion Writing / Archived Drafts » Third Time's the Charm (Rough Draft Thread)
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First Time Doing this. Am I posting my Draft correctly?
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in discussion Writing / Archived Drafts » Rough Draft Critique (Right Forum this Time)
Wait, Sorry wrong part of the Forum
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